Second draft of music video

After editing our video more across the past few days we have managed to produce a second draft version of our music video. This video now includes some lip synching which I am very pleased with as I feel that it makes the video feel much more like  music video rather than a narrative story with a song over the top. After seeking teacher and peer advice we decided to cut the end of our video from where the female character falls pregnant to the end. This is because the first half of our video is in a non-chronological order and it then switches to a chronological order which looked strange and by making the whole thing non-chronological, it flows better and is easier to enjoy.

Here is our second draft;